Plot thread · PT4
the review that gives back
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Wanted result
a review of a screenwalk is finished when it has been given back: Guillaume hears what the model and the seat understood, answers in the circle, and his answer writes the next version; the recording with its voices stays the source; what is taken from Wilson's Research Is Ceremony is cited by page, credited, and not claimed as Miadi's
Current reality
review 6c3f477f was given back once, as version 9 with his words verbatim; corrections C1 to C13 to reviews 6a2b5b59 and b2558ceb are written in the seat ledgers and none is published, because the give-back version goes out only once he approves its exact text; the script 'The review that gives back' is a draft by his word; the ritual-design foundation now cites 43 claims by page and leaves 7 unverified, its release is held, and its lane's report states the case against it: forty-three page numbers and no new relationship
Beats · newest first · 10
2026-10-07 · recorded by mino-miadi-factory-stateloom-smcraft (its Wilson lane)
the ritual-design field rewritten with 43 claims grounded by page and 7 left unverified, with the strongest case against the rewrite
dadc3e6a2026-10-06 · recorded by miadi-review-upgrades-261006-fork1
his correction at 47:35: Research Is Ceremony is a foundation on which to construct his own intellectual home; correction C6 rewritten from his words
b1b411012026-10-06 · recorded by miadi-review-upgrades-261006-fork1
review 6a2b5b59 version 1 checked against the seat ledger: eight corrections, held for a give-back version he approves
12fa81a62026-10-05 · recorded by mino-261005-staging-fork1 (00b0a513)
checkable-handoff revision 1, from his answer: silence never advances a give-back, and a later answer reopens what was grounded (Wilson p. 125)
4d5785a62026-10-05 · recorded by Mino-Bimaadizi-Daa (fork 00b0a513)
version 9, given back: his words at 01:54, 13:17 and 25:04 verbatim, which version 1 had paraphrased or left out
miadi-review:6c3f477f-3606-47bf-871c-29bf66a3988e2026-10-04 · recorded by mino-261002a
by his word the script is a draft and not grounded: there is not enough relation in it
d1a8353d2026-10-04 · recorded by mino-261002a
a screenwalk script of five usages of Wilson for reviews; the first: the review is finished when it has been given back
dc17db132026-10-03 · recorded by mino-miadi-factory-stateloom-smcraft
Wilson chapters six and seven enter the ledger as W7 to W13, among them giving back what was heard to check its accuracy (p. 131)
21b912d22026-10-01 · recorded by mino-miadi-factory-stateloom-smcraft
the principle Guillaume asked to keep: feedback makes the other party's work better, it is not fault-finding to make one's own look better (Wilson p. 57, Meyer)
e477e8b02026-10-01 · recorded by mino-miadi-factory-stateloom-smcraft
Wilson pp. 57-58 enter as the episode's source ledger; the sequence's message 17 is redrawn, because closing v3 ranked the written review above the recording
c7d7643a
Carried by Mino-Bimaadizi-Daa (the source ledger and the Wilson lane), miadi-review-upgrades-261006-fork1 (corrections C1 to C13)
Record kept by ep560-261020-fork-02-creative-space
Opened 2026-10-01 by Guillaume brought Wilson pp. 57-58 into the episode on 2026-10-01 "to evolve our episodes knowledge base and what we do in relation to miadi-review" (source-ledger.md, c7d7643a)
On the belt · the Wampum Narrative Engine
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Groupings proposed from its beats
- Giving back what was heard 8 of its beats · proposed by ep560-261020-fork-02-creative-space for miadi-chronicle:560
PT4: a book about research as ceremony enters the work, and every retelling of his words waits for him to hear it and answer before it counts
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